Riley Season 1 Episode 9 Rewrite “Sector 41”

Disclaimer: I do not own any of the characters on Buffy the Vampire Slayer. They belong to Fox Studios and Joss Whedon. This work is fictional and is only for my and others entertainment. Therefore no infringement is intended. I do not intend to make a profit from this work. However I own all characters that have not previously appeared/been mentioned on Buffy the Vampire Slayer, so I can do whatever I like with them. Therefore no unauthorized usage of these characters is permitted.
START OF EPISODE
TEASER
CUT TO:
INT – LAINTANUNIVERSITY – LECTURE HALL – DAY
Salomie is sitting in her seat with at least a hundred people around her. At the front of lecture hall stands Professor Humphrey, giving a lecture on the purpose of writing. Salomie is, once again, zoning out. She can’t pay attention after last night. Never. All she could think about was how Jill was gay. It was just so surprising. Salomie begins tapping her pencil to keep her mind of things. Sitting next to her is her boyfriend, John. They just recently got back together. Salomie looks over to John, who looks back to her, smiling. Salomie forces a smile, just to not be rude. Salomie looks back to see Jill and Chris sitting next to each other a few rows back. They are smiling and laughing, obviously not listening to Humphrey, either. Jill spots Salomie looking at them and looks back at her. Salomie immediately loses eye contact and looks back to the center of the class, again.
PROFESSOR HUMPHREY: And that concludes today’s lesson. On Wednesday, I want an essay on why you like to write. And no, it can’t be because your teacher told you to.
Giggles go throughout the hall, but Salomie does not laugh.
PROFESSOR HUMPHREY: See you tomorrow.
Professor Humphrey walks to his desk to get his coat and things, as everyone stands up and begins to leave the hall. John and Salomie get up at the same time. Salomie is still distracted, but John doesn’t notice. Salomie looks back to see Chris and Jill walking out of the hall, holding hands.
JOHN: (shaky) Salomie.
Salomie turns back to John, noticing his shakiness.
SALOMIE: What’s wrong?
JOHN: I could ask the same to you.
Salomie is not worried anymore, and she just starts walking down the steps to the exit. John follows right behind her.
JOHN: (following her) You can’t just dismiss this.
They continue walking.
SALOMIE: Can’t I?
JOHN: No, I just said you can’t.
Salomie reaches the exit and walks out into the busy college hallways. John follows right behind her and turns her around.
JOHN: Look, Salomie. I know you care about Jill. You know it, too.
SALOMIE: I do know it. But….it’s too awkward, John. And she lied to me about this, too! We tell each other everything.
JOHN: That last part is an excuse. You only care that it’s awkward.
SALOMIE: (beginning to walk; changing subject) What do you want for dinner tonight?
JOHN: (following her; sighing) Salomie….
SALOMIE: What do you want for dinner tonight? Cause, if you don’t answer, you just won’t eat.
John sighs again, but then gives in and walks with Salomie.
JOHN: Chinese, please.
CUT TO:
EXT – GRAVEYARD – DAY
Riley is walking through the graveyard during the day. It looks much different during the day. He reaches Eliza and another woman with black hair. She looks young, and is extremely beautiful. She is wearing a black top and jeans. She smiles at Riley when he comes to them. Riley looks up and down the woman, confused.
ELIZA: Hello, Riley.
RILEY: (turning to Eliza) Who the hell is this?
WOMAN: It’s nice to meet you, too.
ELIZA: This is Katie.
The woman referred to as Katie extends her hand to shake hands. Riley just stares at her.
RILEY: What is she doing here?
ELIZA: (sighing) She’s a slayer, and she’s kick-ass.
KATIE: Why, thank you.
ELIZA: She’s a contact. We can’t take Nina down alone and you know it. She’s our back-up.
RILEY: (accepting her) Fine. The name’s Riley.
KATIE: (grinning) I know.
RILEY: Well, that isn’t creepy or anything.
ELIZA: We’re leaving tomorrow.
RILEY: (turning to Eliza) Okay, sounds good.
Eliza and Katie turn to walk away but Riley spins Eliza back around/
RILEY: One more thing. Do you have any idea what Nina’s up to? At all?
ELIZA: (smiling) If I did, why would I need you?
RILEY: Eye-candy.
Eliza begins to laugh, and Eliza and Katie turn to leave, once more.
CUT TO:
INT – MELISSA’S HOUSE – DAY
Melissa and Graham are sitting on the couch, both looking incredibly sad.
MELISSA: Graham, I’m so sorry.
GRAHAM: (looking down) You already said that.
MELISSA: I know, but I really mean it.
GRAHAM: I know you do.
MELISSA: I’ll go with you –
GRAHAM: (shouting) No! I have to go alone.
Melissa: (confused) You can’t go through this alone.
GRAHAM: (standing up) I’m not.
MELISSA: Graham….
GRAHAM: Goodbye, Melissa.
Graham walks towards the door, and Melissa watches him leave.
END OF TEASER
OPENING CREDITS
“End of the World” by REM/Great Big Sea starts playing.
STARRING:
Marc Blucas as Riley Finn
Ivana Milicevic as Sam Finn
Bailey Chase as Graham Miller
Jason Dohring as Intank Welleee
And Allison Mack as Salomie Sullivan
GUEST STARRING:
Michael Varton as Michael Gene
Topher Grace as Lain Von
Liza Weil as Melissa Reyna
Jared Padelecki as John Doven
Jewel Staite as Jill Oliver
Santiago Cabrera as Neiki Gareth
Francis Capra as Xad
Kristen Bell as Susan Jaden
Tina Majorino as Chris Gemma
Mary-Louise Parker as Nina Baker
And Nicki Aycox as Eliza Baker
SPECIAL GUEST STARRING:
Jennifer Carpenter as Marie Miller
Peter Krause as Patrick Loney
Lena Headey as Katie Jones
James Lafferty as Shawn Parker
Kevin Zeger as Josh Anna
Zack Ward as Asher Baltar
Rachelle Lefevre as Mara Gold
Adrianne Palicki as Emma Helfer
Matthew Bomer as Pyro
Tahmoh Penikett as Electric Demon
And Skeet Ulrich as James Baker
CREATED BY: BLASTERBOY (BEN)
WRITTEN BY: BLASTERBOY (BEN)
STORY BY: BLASTERBOY (BEN)
EDITED BY: BLASTERBOY (BEN)
BANER BY: AMANTINE (ARI)
ADDITIONAL CASTING BY: DARK AGES (KEVIN)
SONGS USED: “BUILDING A MYSTERY” by SARAH McLACHLAN
PRODUCED BY: DIFFERENT DIMENSIONS INC.
Congratulations to Kevin (DARK AGES), who just came out with an all new series entitled “EAST WICK”, also produced by “Different Dimensions Inc.” Be sure to check the pilot out.
Riley The Series is affiliated with East Wick, written by Kevin (Dark Ages).

Disclaimer: I do not own any of the characters on Buffy the Vampire Slayer. They belong to Fox Studios and Joss Whedon. This work is fictional and is only for my and others entertainment. Therefore no infringement is intended. I do not intend to make a profit from this work. However I own all characters that have not previously appeared/been mentioned on Buffy the Vampire Slayer, so I can do whatever I like with them. Therefore no unauthorized usage of these characters is permitted.
START OF EPISODE
TEASER
CUT TO:
INT – LAINTANUNIVERSITY – LECTURE HALL – DAY
Salomie is sitting in her seat with at least a hundred people around her. At the front of lecture hall stands Professor Humphrey, giving a lecture on the purpose of writing. Salomie is, once again, zoning out. She can’t pay attention after last night. Never. All she could think about was how Jill was gay. It was just so surprising. Salomie begins tapping her pencil to keep her mind of things. Sitting next to her is her boyfriend, John. They just recently got back together. Salomie looks over to John, who looks back to her, smiling. Salomie forces a smile, just to not be rude. Salomie looks back to see Jill and Chris sitting next to each other a few rows back. They are smiling and laughing, obviously not listening to Humphrey, either. Jill spots Salomie looking at them and looks back at her. Salomie immediately loses eye contact and looks back to the center of the class, again.
PROFESSOR HUMPHREY: And that concludes today’s lesson. On Wednesday, I want an essay on why you like to write. And no, it can’t be because your teacher told you to.
Giggles go throughout the hall, but Salomie does not laugh.
PROFESSOR HUMPHREY: See you tomorrow.
Professor Humphrey walks to his desk to get his coat and things, as everyone stands up and begins to leave the hall. John and Salomie get up at the same time. Salomie is still distracted, but John doesn’t notice. Salomie looks back to see Chris and Jill walking out of the hall, holding hands.
JOHN: (shaky) Salomie.
Salomie turns back to John, noticing his shakiness.
SALOMIE: What’s wrong?
JOHN: I could ask the same to you.
Salomie is not worried anymore, and she just starts walking down the steps to the exit. John follows right behind her.
JOHN: (following her) You can’t just dismiss this.
They continue walking.
SALOMIE: Can’t I?
JOHN: No, I just said you can’t.
Salomie reaches the exit and walks out into the busy college hallways. John follows right behind her and turns her around.
JOHN: Look, Salomie. I know you care about Jill. You know it, too.
SALOMIE: I do know it. But….it’s too awkward, John. And she lied to me about this, too! We tell each other everything.
JOHN: That last part is an excuse. You only care that it’s awkward.
SALOMIE: (beginning to walk; changing subject) What do you want for dinner tonight?
JOHN: (following her; sighing) Salomie….
SALOMIE: What do you want for dinner tonight? Cause, if you don’t answer, you just won’t eat.
John sighs again, but then gives in and walks with Salomie.
JOHN: Chinese, please.
CUT TO:
EXT – GRAVEYARD – DAY
Riley is walking through the graveyard during the day. It looks much different during the day. He reaches Eliza and another woman with black hair. She looks young, and is extremely beautiful. She is wearing a black top and jeans. She smiles at Riley when he comes to them. Riley looks up and down the woman, confused.
ELIZA: Hello, Riley.
RILEY: (turning to Eliza) Who the hell is this?
WOMAN: It’s nice to meet you, too.
ELIZA: This is Katie.
The woman referred to as Katie extends her hand to shake hands. Riley just stares at her.
RILEY: What is she doing here?
ELIZA: (sighing) She’s a slayer, and she’s kick-ass.
KATIE: Why, thank you.
ELIZA: She’s a contact. We can’t take Nina down alone and you know it. She’s our back-up.
RILEY: (accepting her) Fine. The name’s Riley.
KATIE: (grinning) I know.
RILEY: Well, that isn’t creepy or anything.
ELIZA: We’re leaving tomorrow.
RILEY: (turning to Eliza) Okay, sounds good.
Eliza and Katie turn to walk away but Riley spins Eliza back around/
RILEY: One more thing. Do you have any idea what Nina’s up to? At all?
ELIZA: (smiling) If I did, why would I need you?
RILEY: Eye-candy.
Eliza begins to laugh, and Eliza and Katie turn to leave, once more.
CUT TO:
INT – MELISSA’S HOUSE – DAY
Melissa and Graham are sitting on the couch, both looking incredibly sad.
MELISSA: Graham, I’m so sorry.
GRAHAM: (looking down) You already said that.
MELISSA: I know, but I really mean it.
GRAHAM: I know you do.
MELISSA: I’ll go with you –
GRAHAM: (shouting) No! I have to go alone.
Melissa: (confused) You can’t go through this alone.
GRAHAM: (standing up) I’m not.
MELISSA: Graham….
GRAHAM: Goodbye, Melissa.
Graham walks towards the door, and Melissa watches him leave.
END OF TEASER
OPENING CREDITS
“End of the World” by REM/Great Big Sea starts playing.
STARRING:
Marc Blucas as Riley Finn
Ivana Milicevic as Sam Finn
Bailey Chase as Graham Miller
Jason Dohring as Intank Welleee
And Allison Mack as Salomie Sullivan
GUEST STARRING:
Michael Varton as Michael Gene
Topher Grace as Lain Von
Liza Weil as Melissa Reyna
Jared Padelecki as John Doven
Jewel Staite as Jill Oliver
Santiago Cabrera as Neiki Gareth
Francis Capra as Xad
Kristen Bell as Susan Jaden
Tina Majorino as Chris Gemma
Mary-Louise Parker as Nina Baker
And Nicki Aycox as Eliza Baker
SPECIAL GUEST STARRING:
Jennifer Carpenter as Marie Miller
Peter Krause as Patrick Loney
Lena Headey as Katie Jones
James Lafferty as Shawn Parker
Kevin Zeger as Josh Anna
Zack Ward as Asher Baltar
Rachelle Lefevre as Mara Gold
Adrianne Palicki as Emma Helfer
Matthew Bomer as Pyro
Tahmoh Penikett as Electric Demon
And Skeet Ulrich as James Baker
CREATED BY: BLASTERBOY (BEN)
WRITTEN BY: BLASTERBOY (BEN)
STORY BY: BLASTERBOY (BEN)
EDITED BY: BLASTERBOY (BEN)
BANER BY: AMANTINE (ARI)
ADDITIONAL CASTING BY: DARK AGES (KEVIN)
SONGS USED: “BUILDING A MYSTERY” by SARAH McLACHLAN
PRODUCED BY: DIFFERENT DIMENSIONS INC.
Congratulations to Kevin (DARK AGES), who just came out with an all new series entitled “EAST WICK”, also produced by “Different Dimensions Inc.” Be sure to check the pilot out.
Riley The Series is affiliated with East Wick, written by Kevin (Dark Ages).
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