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Buffy Episode 8.9 153. Fractures
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Chris VO: Previously on Buffy the Vampire Slayer
Buffy VO: Every girl who might be a Slayer will be a Slayer.
Kennedy becomes a Slayer, Vi becomes a Slayer. Siobhan smiles. Kass smiles.
Willow: Slayers are awakening everywhere.
Chris: The problem is girls. They're terrorizing New York.
Buffy: We knew there were other Slayers?we hoped none of them would turn out?uh?
Siobhan: Rouge?
Kass punches someone. Marie looks up smiling darkly. Kirsty laughs. Line kicks someone. Kelly smiles slightly.
Buffy: They're my mistake.
Willow: Our mistake. We just gotta keep going until we make it better. I know we can never do it completely, but little by little.
Buffy: Yeah.
A shot of Andrew in a hospital bed with Siobhan by his side.
Siobhan: Andrew you gotta wake up.
Cut to him awake. Siobhan runs up to him.
Siobhan: Andrew!
Andrew is sat up watching TV.
Andrew: Oh! Hey! You stayed with me.
Siobhan: Yeah I did. How did you?
Andrew bites his lip.
Siobhan: You heard me?
Andrew: It's so great than we can be so close as friends.
Siobhan's smile fades.
Siobhan: Friends?
Siobhan runs out. Cut to Darkley. Xander, Willow and Kennedy are staring at Claudia.
Courtney: This is Agent 096 we have a problem. It's too bad Xander. Things might have worked between us. Unfortunate you had to fall in with this crowd.
Xander: Why?
Courtney: We've had a problem with a sudden outbreak of unexplainable strength in young girls all over the world since May. And we know that's it's because of you that they're like that.
Courtney gasps as a sword sticks through her.
Luce appears.[/I]
Luce: Got no words for me Chris?
Chris looks shocked. Luce attacks Chris and Willow. Willow's hair turns black.
Willow: Willow: I should have been able to stop the evil.
And I'll be here to help you.
Willow smiles at Kennedy.
Willow: I know. But if I go back to that place?the place I was after Tara died. Will you still be here? You won't be able to help.
Kennedy looks worried. Cut to Dawn and Chris.
Chris: I know you probably can't trust me after learning that I stole from her.
Dawn: No. I can trust you.
Chris: I'm not sure.
Dawn: I am.
They kiss and fall back on the bed.
START OF EPISODE
ACT I
Open on Buffy walking down the stairs. She looks to her left. Kennedy, Dawn and Siobhan are sat in the living room watching TV. She looks to her right. Willow is sat in the kitchen. She walks in.
Buffy: Hey Will.
Willow: Hey.
Buffy: Everything ok?
Willow: I'm not sure.
Buffy: You mean what happened with Luce and Chris?
Willow: Yeah?Kennedy hasn't talked to me much since then.
Buffy: C'mon Will it's only been one day. She'll be ok, it's just seeing darkness like that freaks people at first. Believe me when I saw The First's true form back last Christmas there was a lot of freak.
Willow: That came out of me. Just like all the other darkness. I think it's me. I'm like a dark magnet. Maybe I have an invisible sign that says "all darkness come here for your vacation it'll be great".
Buffy: You're don't. Slayer spell remember? Your hair turned white. That's gotta mean major good.
Willow: Ok so maybe there was good power in that scythe but I dunno if it could fight the darkness that's already there. It's like there's a big battle going on in me. One with those big tanks and bombs and world domination.
Buffy: Ouch.
Willow: Sometimes.
Buffy: Really? Cos I was just being metaphorical.
Willow: Well I don't know exactly. It's just a lot of pressure. Like I'm fracturing from the inside or something.
Buffy: There's no pressure right now. The Rogue Slayers are nowhere to be seen and Kenney will come around. You two are good together.
Willow smiles. The camera moves over to the living room to show Kennedy is not actually looking at the TV but the floor. She looks worried. The camera moves over to Siobhan who is staring at the TV looking upset. The camera moves to Dawn who looks confused and hurt.
Cut to Darkley. A car pulls up. Kass, Marie and Line get out of it.
Line: I told you Kelly was gone.
Kass: I don't understand?I gave her a way out.
Marie: She wasn't strong enough to deal with it.
Kass: No. But you two are right? You'll stay with me. We're gonna win this.
Line: Sure Kass.
Marie: Yeah of course.
Kass: Good.
She smiles at the others.
Kass: Now we need to-
There is gunfire. The car windscreen breaks. Kass, Line and Marie dive for cover.
Kass: What the hell was that?
Marie: I think we were followed.
Kass: Make a run for it.
They run. Gunfire follows them. Marie dives into the bushes. Kass follows her. Line is about to when a bullet hits her leg.
Line: Ah!
She falls to the ground. Marie looks behind her and wants to help but Kass pulls her away. Footsteps are heard. She tries to crawl into the bushes but several guns are head being loaded.
Man: Freeze!
Line looks up and sees several soldiers.
Soldier: Sir we got one!
The soldiers part. Another soldier walks slowly towards Line. He takes off his mask.
Riley: Good. Arrest her.
The soldiers close in on Line.
Opening credits.
Starring:
SARAH MICHELLE GELLAR - Buffy Summers
NICHOLAS BRENDAN - Xander Harris
ALYSON HANNIGAN - Willow Rosenberg
MICHELLE TRACHTENBURG - Dawn Summers
JASON DOHRING - Chris Ashton
IYARI LIMON - Kennedy Elisonne
JEMIMA ROOPER - Siobhan Bligh
TOM LENK - Andrew Wells
ANTHONY STEWART HEAD - Rupert Giles
Special Guest Star:
MARC BLUCAS - Riley Finn
Guest Starring:
LAUREN AMBROSE - Kass
KATIE HOLMES - Kelly
MICHELLE WILLIAMS - Marie
ALEXIS BLEDEL - Line
Cut to Chris lying on Dawn's bed. He is reading a magazine of some kind. Dawn comes in.
Dawn: Oh!
Chris: Hey. Sorry should I go?
Dawn: No it's ok, I just uh, I didn't think you'd be here.
Chris: This room's a lot nicer than mine. If it's ok I'd like to stay here for a bit.
Dawn: Sure help yourself.
Dawn turns to leave.
Chris: You don't have to go you know. It's your room.
Dawn: It's ok. Really.
Dawn turns to go again. Chris frowns.
Chris: Is there something wrong?
Dawn is turned away from Chris. She closes her eyes slowly and opens them again before turning around smiling.
Dawn: No I'm fine. I just have stuff to do.
Chris: Are you sure you're like worried about what happened last-
Dawn: I'm?last night was um?new?
Chris: But it was good right? I mean you wanted to-
Dawn: I wanted to. I just didn't realise?I mean it was like so soon?
Chris: I didn't realise that you wanted to wait. You should have said, I would have-
Dawn: Chris can we not? I um I don't wanna talk about this right now.
Chris: Because it upsets you.
Dawn: God! Chris I?look please I just?I need time?to think about what we did. It was nice. I wanted it. I just wasn't?prepared.
Chris: You should have told me.
Dawn: I just did.
Dawn turns to go. Chris looks worried. He lays back on the bed and exhales.
Cut to Darkley hospital. Xander is pushing Andrew in a wheelchair.
Andrew: It'll be good to get home. See my comics again. There are some I missed pretty bad.
Xander smiles but shakes his head.
Xander: Yeah everyone's been pretty concerned. Especially Siobhan.
Andrew: Hmm.
Xander: You two were pretty close until recently. What happened?
Andrew: Um I dunno really. She seemed shocked when I said that we should be friends.
Xander: You said what?
Andrew: Friends. Good friends you know? I thought that's what she'd want to hear.
Xander: Andrew, the last thing you say to a girl who likes you is "let's be friends". Even you must know that?
Andrew: Well?it's not like I ever?had to do it before?
Xander: Really? Not even a little bit?
Andrew: No?you mean Siobhan's angry?
Xander: On a scale of one to ten oh yeah.
Andrew: Oh?
They come out of the hospital.
Xander: But you do like her right?
Andrew: Well?the thing is I-
Xander: Oh my god.
Andrew: I, I don't mean that?
Xander is staring somewhere else.
Andrew: Oh?um what are you looking at?
The camera shows a group of guys. One of them is Riley.
Andrew: Xander? Xander?
Xander: I have to tell Buffy.
Cut to the Summers' house. Everyone is in the kitchen but they are all sat in silence.
Buffy: So, um, it's good that Andrew's well enough to come back right?
Dawn: Yeah?
Siobhan: Mm-hmm?it's just great.
There is silence again.
Buffy: So uh Dawn, how go things with you and Chris?
Dawn and Chris look at each other.
Dawn: Good.
Chris: Never better.
They look at the table. Buffy smiles but soon stops when no one else does.
Kennedy: Don't ask about me and Willow Buffy.
Willow stares at Kennedy sadly. Buffy frowns. Siobhan gets up and goes upstairs. Dawn follows. Kennedy goes off to her room. Chris goes to his room. Willow gets up, looks back at Buffy and smiles slightly.
Willow: Thanks for trying.
She walks off. Buffy nods to herself.
Buffy: Ok?I'm not gonna let all this get me down, I'm gonna go for a walk.
She gets up and walks to the front door. She opens it.
Xander: Buffy-
Buffy: Xander hey I?Andrew! Hey!
Andrew: Hey Buffy.
Buffy: I'm so glad you're ok. I felt like so bad after what happened.
Andrew: Don't worry I'm getting better. Just a few fractured ribs. And the people in Star Trek recovered from way worse than this anyway.
Buffy: Ok whatever you say.
Xander: Buffy we need to talk.
Buffy: Oh? About what. I mean Andrew's back now can't we celebrate before-
Xander: Riley's here. In Darkley.
Buffy's smiles fades.
Cut to Buffy and Xander sat at the kitchen table.
Buffy: And you're sure it's him?
Xander: Buffy I do remember what he looked like.
Buffy: It just doesn't make sense. Why would he be here? I don't think he's a tourist kinda guy.
Xander: I might know.
Buffy: What?
Xander: Something Courtney said. Remember I said she was part of the army? Well she said that they were having problems - like we were - with the Rogue Slayers.
Buffy: You think he knows how I'm involved with them?
Xander: Well the police do. I wouldn't be surprised if the army did too.
Buffy: God I forgot about the police. They haven't done anything yet though. Unless they're watching us?
Xander and Buffy look around.
Buffy: Ok maybe I'm being paranoid here.
Xander: Well we just gotta make sure we know what's going on. Are you gonna go find Riley?
Buffy: I guess. I mean it's probably not long before he-
The doorbell rings.
Buffy: ?finds me.
She goes to the door and opens it. She looks puzzled and looks at the ground. There is a package addressed to the house, but no person in particular. She studies it and takes it back to Xander.
Xander: I'm guessing it wasn't the army then?
Buffy: No just this.
Xander: What is it?
Buffy: I dunno. I haven't got time to look at it now anyway.
Xander: Maybe you should. I mean post at this time of day means you've either won the lottery or it's a trap.
Buffy: Let's hope it's the first one.
Xander: Is there ticking?
Buffy listens.
Buffy: Um, no.
Xander: Ok. You're not gonna open it?
Buffy: Might not even be for me. Could be for any of us.
The camera moves onto the package.

Buffy Episode 8.9 153. Fractures
Disclaimer: I do not own any of the characters on Buffy the Vampire Slayer. They belong to Fox Studios and Joss Whedon. This work is fictional and is only for my and others entertainment. Therefore no infringement is intended. I do not intend to make a profit from this work. However I own all characters that have not previously appeared/been mentioned on Buffy the Vampire Slayer, so I can do whatever I like with them. Therefore any unauthorised usage of these characters is not permitted.
Chris VO: Previously on Buffy the Vampire Slayer
Buffy VO: Every girl who might be a Slayer will be a Slayer.
Kennedy becomes a Slayer, Vi becomes a Slayer. Siobhan smiles. Kass smiles.
Willow: Slayers are awakening everywhere.
Chris: The problem is girls. They're terrorizing New York.
Buffy: We knew there were other Slayers?we hoped none of them would turn out?uh?
Siobhan: Rouge?
Kass punches someone. Marie looks up smiling darkly. Kirsty laughs. Line kicks someone. Kelly smiles slightly.
Buffy: They're my mistake.
Willow: Our mistake. We just gotta keep going until we make it better. I know we can never do it completely, but little by little.
Buffy: Yeah.
A shot of Andrew in a hospital bed with Siobhan by his side.
Siobhan: Andrew you gotta wake up.
Cut to him awake. Siobhan runs up to him.
Siobhan: Andrew!
Andrew is sat up watching TV.
Andrew: Oh! Hey! You stayed with me.
Siobhan: Yeah I did. How did you?
Andrew bites his lip.
Siobhan: You heard me?
Andrew: It's so great than we can be so close as friends.
Siobhan's smile fades.
Siobhan: Friends?
Siobhan runs out. Cut to Darkley. Xander, Willow and Kennedy are staring at Claudia.
Courtney: This is Agent 096 we have a problem. It's too bad Xander. Things might have worked between us. Unfortunate you had to fall in with this crowd.
Xander: Why?
Courtney: We've had a problem with a sudden outbreak of unexplainable strength in young girls all over the world since May. And we know that's it's because of you that they're like that.
Courtney gasps as a sword sticks through her.
Luce appears.[/I]
Luce: Got no words for me Chris?
Chris looks shocked. Luce attacks Chris and Willow. Willow's hair turns black.
Willow: Willow: I should have been able to stop the evil.
And I'll be here to help you.
Willow smiles at Kennedy.
Willow: I know. But if I go back to that place?the place I was after Tara died. Will you still be here? You won't be able to help.
Kennedy looks worried. Cut to Dawn and Chris.
Chris: I know you probably can't trust me after learning that I stole from her.
Dawn: No. I can trust you.
Chris: I'm not sure.
Dawn: I am.
They kiss and fall back on the bed.
START OF EPISODE
ACT I
Open on Buffy walking down the stairs. She looks to her left. Kennedy, Dawn and Siobhan are sat in the living room watching TV. She looks to her right. Willow is sat in the kitchen. She walks in.
Buffy: Hey Will.
Willow: Hey.
Buffy: Everything ok?
Willow: I'm not sure.
Buffy: You mean what happened with Luce and Chris?
Willow: Yeah?Kennedy hasn't talked to me much since then.
Buffy: C'mon Will it's only been one day. She'll be ok, it's just seeing darkness like that freaks people at first. Believe me when I saw The First's true form back last Christmas there was a lot of freak.
Willow: That came out of me. Just like all the other darkness. I think it's me. I'm like a dark magnet. Maybe I have an invisible sign that says "all darkness come here for your vacation it'll be great".
Buffy: You're don't. Slayer spell remember? Your hair turned white. That's gotta mean major good.
Willow: Ok so maybe there was good power in that scythe but I dunno if it could fight the darkness that's already there. It's like there's a big battle going on in me. One with those big tanks and bombs and world domination.
Buffy: Ouch.
Willow: Sometimes.
Buffy: Really? Cos I was just being metaphorical.
Willow: Well I don't know exactly. It's just a lot of pressure. Like I'm fracturing from the inside or something.
Buffy: There's no pressure right now. The Rogue Slayers are nowhere to be seen and Kenney will come around. You two are good together.
Willow smiles. The camera moves over to the living room to show Kennedy is not actually looking at the TV but the floor. She looks worried. The camera moves over to Siobhan who is staring at the TV looking upset. The camera moves to Dawn who looks confused and hurt.
Cut to Darkley. A car pulls up. Kass, Marie and Line get out of it.
Line: I told you Kelly was gone.
Kass: I don't understand?I gave her a way out.
Marie: She wasn't strong enough to deal with it.
Kass: No. But you two are right? You'll stay with me. We're gonna win this.
Line: Sure Kass.
Marie: Yeah of course.
Kass: Good.
She smiles at the others.
Kass: Now we need to-
There is gunfire. The car windscreen breaks. Kass, Line and Marie dive for cover.
Kass: What the hell was that?
Marie: I think we were followed.
Kass: Make a run for it.
They run. Gunfire follows them. Marie dives into the bushes. Kass follows her. Line is about to when a bullet hits her leg.
Line: Ah!
She falls to the ground. Marie looks behind her and wants to help but Kass pulls her away. Footsteps are heard. She tries to crawl into the bushes but several guns are head being loaded.
Man: Freeze!
Line looks up and sees several soldiers.
Soldier: Sir we got one!
The soldiers part. Another soldier walks slowly towards Line. He takes off his mask.
Riley: Good. Arrest her.
The soldiers close in on Line.
Opening credits.
Starring:
SARAH MICHELLE GELLAR - Buffy Summers
NICHOLAS BRENDAN - Xander Harris
ALYSON HANNIGAN - Willow Rosenberg
MICHELLE TRACHTENBURG - Dawn Summers
JASON DOHRING - Chris Ashton
IYARI LIMON - Kennedy Elisonne
JEMIMA ROOPER - Siobhan Bligh
TOM LENK - Andrew Wells
ANTHONY STEWART HEAD - Rupert Giles
Special Guest Star:
MARC BLUCAS - Riley Finn
Guest Starring:
LAUREN AMBROSE - Kass
KATIE HOLMES - Kelly
MICHELLE WILLIAMS - Marie
ALEXIS BLEDEL - Line
Cut to Chris lying on Dawn's bed. He is reading a magazine of some kind. Dawn comes in.
Dawn: Oh!
Chris: Hey. Sorry should I go?
Dawn: No it's ok, I just uh, I didn't think you'd be here.
Chris: This room's a lot nicer than mine. If it's ok I'd like to stay here for a bit.
Dawn: Sure help yourself.
Dawn turns to leave.
Chris: You don't have to go you know. It's your room.
Dawn: It's ok. Really.
Dawn turns to go again. Chris frowns.
Chris: Is there something wrong?
Dawn is turned away from Chris. She closes her eyes slowly and opens them again before turning around smiling.
Dawn: No I'm fine. I just have stuff to do.
Chris: Are you sure you're like worried about what happened last-
Dawn: I'm?last night was um?new?
Chris: But it was good right? I mean you wanted to-
Dawn: I wanted to. I just didn't realise?I mean it was like so soon?
Chris: I didn't realise that you wanted to wait. You should have said, I would have-
Dawn: Chris can we not? I um I don't wanna talk about this right now.
Chris: Because it upsets you.
Dawn: God! Chris I?look please I just?I need time?to think about what we did. It was nice. I wanted it. I just wasn't?prepared.
Chris: You should have told me.
Dawn: I just did.
Dawn turns to go. Chris looks worried. He lays back on the bed and exhales.
Cut to Darkley hospital. Xander is pushing Andrew in a wheelchair.
Andrew: It'll be good to get home. See my comics again. There are some I missed pretty bad.
Xander smiles but shakes his head.
Xander: Yeah everyone's been pretty concerned. Especially Siobhan.
Andrew: Hmm.
Xander: You two were pretty close until recently. What happened?
Andrew: Um I dunno really. She seemed shocked when I said that we should be friends.
Xander: You said what?
Andrew: Friends. Good friends you know? I thought that's what she'd want to hear.
Xander: Andrew, the last thing you say to a girl who likes you is "let's be friends". Even you must know that?
Andrew: Well?it's not like I ever?had to do it before?
Xander: Really? Not even a little bit?
Andrew: No?you mean Siobhan's angry?
Xander: On a scale of one to ten oh yeah.
Andrew: Oh?
They come out of the hospital.
Xander: But you do like her right?
Andrew: Well?the thing is I-
Xander: Oh my god.
Andrew: I, I don't mean that?
Xander is staring somewhere else.
Andrew: Oh?um what are you looking at?
The camera shows a group of guys. One of them is Riley.
Andrew: Xander? Xander?
Xander: I have to tell Buffy.
Cut to the Summers' house. Everyone is in the kitchen but they are all sat in silence.
Buffy: So, um, it's good that Andrew's well enough to come back right?
Dawn: Yeah?
Siobhan: Mm-hmm?it's just great.
There is silence again.
Buffy: So uh Dawn, how go things with you and Chris?
Dawn and Chris look at each other.
Dawn: Good.
Chris: Never better.
They look at the table. Buffy smiles but soon stops when no one else does.
Kennedy: Don't ask about me and Willow Buffy.
Willow stares at Kennedy sadly. Buffy frowns. Siobhan gets up and goes upstairs. Dawn follows. Kennedy goes off to her room. Chris goes to his room. Willow gets up, looks back at Buffy and smiles slightly.
Willow: Thanks for trying.
She walks off. Buffy nods to herself.
Buffy: Ok?I'm not gonna let all this get me down, I'm gonna go for a walk.
She gets up and walks to the front door. She opens it.
Xander: Buffy-
Buffy: Xander hey I?Andrew! Hey!
Andrew: Hey Buffy.
Buffy: I'm so glad you're ok. I felt like so bad after what happened.
Andrew: Don't worry I'm getting better. Just a few fractured ribs. And the people in Star Trek recovered from way worse than this anyway.
Buffy: Ok whatever you say.
Xander: Buffy we need to talk.
Buffy: Oh? About what. I mean Andrew's back now can't we celebrate before-
Xander: Riley's here. In Darkley.
Buffy's smiles fades.
Cut to Buffy and Xander sat at the kitchen table.
Buffy: And you're sure it's him?
Xander: Buffy I do remember what he looked like.
Buffy: It just doesn't make sense. Why would he be here? I don't think he's a tourist kinda guy.
Xander: I might know.
Buffy: What?
Xander: Something Courtney said. Remember I said she was part of the army? Well she said that they were having problems - like we were - with the Rogue Slayers.
Buffy: You think he knows how I'm involved with them?
Xander: Well the police do. I wouldn't be surprised if the army did too.
Buffy: God I forgot about the police. They haven't done anything yet though. Unless they're watching us?
Xander and Buffy look around.
Buffy: Ok maybe I'm being paranoid here.
Xander: Well we just gotta make sure we know what's going on. Are you gonna go find Riley?
Buffy: I guess. I mean it's probably not long before he-
The doorbell rings.
Buffy: ?finds me.
She goes to the door and opens it. She looks puzzled and looks at the ground. There is a package addressed to the house, but no person in particular. She studies it and takes it back to Xander.
Xander: I'm guessing it wasn't the army then?
Buffy: No just this.
Xander: What is it?
Buffy: I dunno. I haven't got time to look at it now anyway.
Xander: Maybe you should. I mean post at this time of day means you've either won the lottery or it's a trap.
Buffy: Let's hope it's the first one.
Xander: Is there ticking?
Buffy listens.
Buffy: Um, no.
Xander: Ok. You're not gonna open it?
Buffy: Might not even be for me. Could be for any of us.
The camera moves onto the package.
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