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  • #2
    I have a feedback thread? Hee! Cool. Thank you, Jo

    My Fics So Far

    In Buffy:

    Faces, Ethan/Spike
    https://www.buffyforums.net/showthread.php?t=347

    But you don't really care for music, do you? Gen, Dawn-centric
    https://www.buffyforums.net/showthread.php?t=377

    In Doctor Who (all Doctor/Master centric ) :

    The Blue Depth of the Sky
    https://www.buffyforums.net/showthread.php?t=563

    Like gold to aery thinness beat
    https://www.buffyforums.net/showthread.php?t=648

    A Chink Too Wide
    https://www.buffyforums.net/showthread.php?t=793

    Any Feedback Contribution Gratefully Accepted
    "When people call people nerds, mostly what they are saying is, 'You like stuff', which is just not a good insult at all, like 'You are too enthusiastic about the miracle of human consciousness'."
    -John Green

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    • #3
      The Air In Your Lungs... wow, that was just lovely. Maybe I'm just lazy and don't want to read too much, but I liked how I felt the strength of the piece was its simplicity, and the lovely day to day Dawn/Buffy interactions, all highlighted as being the more real for the loss...

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      • #4
        Originally posted by Veverka View Post
        The Air In Your Lungs... wow, that was just lovely. Maybe I'm just lazy and don't want to read too much, but I liked how I felt the strength of the piece was its simplicity, and the lovely day to day Dawn/Buffy interactions, all highlighted as being the more real for the loss...
        I'm really glad you liked! I'm pleased the simplicity worked: I think character pieces don't need as much length to work, and I'm glad you thought so too.

        Thank you
        "When people call people nerds, mostly what they are saying is, 'You like stuff', which is just not a good insult at all, like 'You are too enthusiastic about the miracle of human consciousness'."
        -John Green

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        • #5
          It does, work that is . The Air in Your Lungs was elegant really. As mentioned the simplicity was a strength as was the rather graphic imagery mixed with somewhat light dialogue.

          This line:
          "I dream about rotting flesh, and choking on stale air, and the harshness of sunlight after the light of heaven. I don't dream about you, Spike. I never have."
          working as both a comfort and a sword through the heart-perfect. White, hot, tragic perfection.
          "All I ask is that... that you try to see me."

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          • #6
            Originally posted by Dorian's Kitten View Post
            It does, work that is . The Air in Your Lungs was elegant really. As mentioned the simplicity was a strength as was the rather graphic imagery mixed with somewhat light dialogue.

            This line:
            "I dream about rotting flesh, and choking on stale air, and the harshness of sunlight after the light of heaven. I don't dream about you, Spike. I never have."
            working as both a comfort and a sword through the heart-perfect. White, hot, tragic perfection.
            Thank you so much! You say all the right words! I'm so glad you thought it all worked.
            "When people call people nerds, mostly what they are saying is, 'You like stuff', which is just not a good insult at all, like 'You are too enthusiastic about the miracle of human consciousness'."
            -John Green

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