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[Llywela]

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[Dark Ages]

Well Ben,
The Riley season Finale was pretty good and I like it. It had action it made me laugh and it was not a boring moment. The big battle when Heather kicks ass. That Russian slit kick was great with the gun. I have to give you a thumps up ong this ep. I wish

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Susan would have met her maker & Sam.

LOL . It was good keep up the good work.

[BlasterBoy]

Thanks, Kevin!

I also liked those scenes! I love writing Heather! I'm glad you enjoyed it, I worked hard on it!

[BlasterBoy]

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Riley: The Series :: INDEX

1.01-2.06
2.07 Coming Soon

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[Dark Ages]

BENGY!

Hey Bengy I read the revamped version of the first episode. I think it was really good and well written. I thingk this time around Riley was written in charcter and Intank was great also. I love how you you changed the stor but kept some things the same. I would have to say good work and cant wait until revamped episode two hits the threads. Bye
- Kevin

[BlasterBoy]

Thanks, Kevin!

I put a lot of effort to make this version bearable ( ), so, I'm glad you liked it! Intank is so much fun to write, you know! I just can't sometimes, but that feeling grows when he gets more of a storyline later on And glad Riley = IN CHARACTER! YAY! Can't wait to hear from you again! If there's anything you find annoying or bad, please tell! Keep reading!.....please Thank you so much!

[BlasterBoy]

ATTENTION!

Unfortunately, my hard drive has been completely erased, meaning I've lost two years worth of writing. So, I lost all my future plans, and I lost all my episode 3 rewrites. So, there will be a very long hiatus. Sorry, guys.

[BlasterBoy]

NEWS! Hiatus time is over and a new episode, "Breaking" is released.

And the rewrites are very important to read, because characters are being introduced that will be back later! I hope you readers read

[Dark Ages]

BENGYYY!!!!!

I'm leaving Feedback

Okay first off I want to tell you that I love the new direction Riley: The Series is heading into. I love the new storylines and the new characters. I have to say Eliza is catching up with Heather in my favorite character pole. The revamped storylines also gives a brand new feeling to Riley. I love how it kind of reminds me of Supernatural (Thats really good)

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1.05 "Hasn't Even Begun": Bengy, I have to say that I really like this episode. I love that fact that Eliza and Riley are working together as one. And the whole idea where they chain Riley and Eliza in the cave showing them their worst memories ever. I say thats clever. And My girl Salomie not letting the event that happen to her go. I love how she really wants to find out who saved her that night. I know she's a reporter and all but I still love it. This episode wass awesome. Next time I promise I'll give more detailed feedback Bye BENGY!!!!!!!!

[BlasterBoy]

BENGYYY!!!!!

I'm leaving Feedback

Okay first off I want to tell you that I love the new direction Riley: The Series is heading into. I love the new storylines and the new characters. I have to say Eliza is catching up with Heather in my favorite character pole. The revamped storylines also gives a brand new feeling to Riley. I love how it kind of reminds me of Supernatural (Thats really good)

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1.05 "Hasn't Even Begun": Bengy, I have to say that I really like this episode. I love that fact that Eliza and Riley are working together as one. And the whole idea where they chain Riley and Eliza in the cave showing them their worst memories ever. I say thats clever. And My girl Salomie not letting the event that happen to her go. I love how she really wants to find out who saved her that night. I know she's a reporter and all but I still love it. This episode wass awesome. Next time I promise I'll give more detailed feedback Bye BENGY!!!!!!!!

YAY! As you know, I'm very happy for feedback hehe!

Thanks, for some reason, I knew you'd love Eliza (and hopefully Nina). Their storyline is much more connected that you think, and all is revealed in 1.07 "Solitude". And guess what's that all about? ELIZA! It's her flashback episode, and it features Nina prominently, too. Also, it brings an end to the Sam's secret storyline. Well, you get to find out her secret. I wouldn't say it's over, though

About 1.05....

Yep, that's Salomie for ya. She's confident and ready to fight as you will see in 1.06. She can be a wimp sometimes, but she is in charge of her situation and wants to fight for everything. She really is fun to write because of how confident she is at times. I wouldn't say Eliza and Riley are working together, but Riley is beginning to accept Eliza, and it's happening way more fast than him with Intank. Is it because of gender? Looks? Hmm, maybe. Yeah, Xad and the worst memories ever thing was part of the original plans, and I felt it had to be in there. I just rewrote tons of the flashbacks. Thanks!

I really hope you continue to read and keep up with the series, because getting feedback from you is awesome!

[kjhurd15]

I like your Riley Fanfic.
I also loved the season finale.
Though their is one thing why did you change the actress for Salomie?

[BlasterBoy]

Thanks a ton Glad you liked the season finale, even though it technically didn't "air" yet. Read the rewrites, because there are plots there and new characters that are new and come into play for later seasons. They are important, so read please

The reason I changed the actress for Salomie early on is that I didn't think 1) Kristin Dunst was good enough, and 2) she was way too old for the role. I think Allison Mack fits the role much better, so I kept her. Plus, she's a reporter from Smallville, so I already know she can do that snooping around stuff. Here's a little tidbit about what's to come for Salomie: I'm thinking of chopping her name down, like a nickname to Sal or Sally or something like that.

I'm glad you like the series so far and I really hope you continue to leave feedback and enjoy it Remember to read rewrites, and thanks so much!

[Dark Ages]

Bengy! Leavin you some feedback

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Episode: 1.06
This episode was really good. It was awesome to see my girl Salomie apart of the gang. Also she never backed down to Neiki. But some times that makes me cringe that she's so ballsey. I dont want her to die beacuse of it. So, Nina using John. I dont like her very much and I think I never will. Also!! I'm a still a little about sword and glass killing vampires. (if you stab them througth the heart.) I really liked this episode and I'm about to go read more!

Bye!

[BlasterBoy]

YAY! Thanks for the feedback!

Glad you liked the episode:

This episode was really good. It was awesome to see my girl Salomie apart of the gang. Also she never backed down to Neiki. But some times that makes me cringe that she's so ballsey. I dont want her to die beacuse of it.

I don't think Salomie will die anytime soon I'm glad you liked Salomie's introduction, because it took her long enough to join in, so I couldn't wait to actually write her with them.

So, Nina using John. I dont like her very much and I think I never will.

I think she'll grow on you Right now, Nina's just this mysterious bitch. But, in 1.07, she gets a lot more interesting, IMO. But, then again, you might never like her haha.

Also!! I'm a still a little about sword and glass killing vampires. (if you stab them througth the heart.) I really liked this episode and I'm about to go read more!

Yeah, I could've sworn I had seen that happening before on BtVS and AtS. Hmm

Thanks again!

[kjhurd15]

Still Love re reading the episodes.
Though i have one question though is Buffy going to drop by in any of the episodes or is it just not happening?
And another thing does season 1 coincide along with Buffy Season 6 since Sam and Riley were last seen there?

[BlasterBoy]

Still Love re reading the episodes.
Though i have one question though is Buffy going to drop by in any of the episodes or is it just not happening?
And another thing does season 1 coincide along with Buffy Season 6 since Sam and Riley were last seen there?

Thanks. A new episode is coming out tomorrow, btw. So, keep an eye out for that.

Buffy is not going to come into the show, but again, someone related to one of the core four is coming to be a regular in Season 2.

And Season 1 is AFTER "Chosen", because Sam and Riley have obviously known each other for more than a year now. Also, that's why there are new slayers sprouting up Thanks!

[Dark Ages]

BENGY!!! So I read episode: 1.09 "Sector 41" I really liked it.

FEEDBACK!!!

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First off Riley and Sam's reationship going to hell. YES!! I'm actually excited about that. I'm also excited about Katie, she's awesome and in the future I hope her and Sam have a show down!! But, I do feel that Katie and Riley's relationship seemed a tad bit rushed. The recruits... So it sucked to see Mara and Josh die, but I didnt really get a feel of them, so it wasnt too sad. I do like Emma. I thought she was going to die when she was stabbed, and I was gonna feel horrible.

Graham and his sister, I like Marie and its crazy how Graham is being effected by Neiki who's starting to mess with the group now, instead of just Intank. Eliza and Nina's fight was great. I wish Eliza would have killed that bitch, but I'm bias b/c Eliza is my girl. Well even though Sam is NOT my favorite, I think her and Michael should take it a step further, since Riley had sex with Katie. I like the new villian, Pyro. It looks like he's gonna be up to no good. I also have an idea.. (I'll PM you) Last... Salomie a WITCH!!! OMG! I hope the magic doenst go to her head and she looses John.

Questions:
-When will Katie return?
-Will Katie and Sam meet? Will Michael and Riley get into it?
-Will Salomie stay a witch, or is this just a trial for her?
-Will Chris and Jill workout, or is it just a fling?

Bengy, this was a good episode, very epic. Cant wait till the next episode!

[BlasterBoy]

First off Riley and Sam's reationship going to hell. YES!! I'm actually excited about that. I'm also excited about Katie, she's awesome and in the future I hope her and Sam have a show down!! But, I do feel that Katie and Riley's relationship seemed a tad bit rushed.

Yep, Riley/Sam are totally done, I can tell you that fo' sure. Katie was always in my head for Season 2 and I'm doing these rewrites, so I felt it was the perfect time to bring her in. I'll answer your question about her below. And Katie/Riley were never a relationship, per say, more of just a thing. Riley wanted to love something, Sam wouldn't do, so this hot woman would have to fill that quota

The recruits... So it sucked to see Mara and Josh die, but I didnt really get a feel of them, so it wasnt too sad. I do like Emma. I thought she was going to die when she was stabbed, and I was gonna feel horrible.

Well, I had to kill someone, right? Army of demons vs. seven people. Hard to live through that, haha. The remaining two recruits will come back, btw, just not sure when yet.

Graham and his sister, I like Marie and its crazy how Graham is being effected by Neiki who's starting to mess with the group now, instead of just Intank.

Good thing you like Marie now, because Season 2 will see a lot of her and *gasp* a baby. Yeah, Neiki is going to go after Intank's friends now and taunt him about it, only way to really get to him. Next episode Neiki will specifically go after Sam, Ian, and a surprise guest.

Eliza and Nina's fight was great. I wish Eliza would have killed that bitch, but I'm bias b/c Eliza is my girl.

Haha, Nina's totally not gone. Glad you liked that fight, tried to make it as epic as possible.

Well even though Sam is NOT my favorite, I think her and Michael should take it a step further, since Riley had sex with Katie. I like the new villian, Pyro. It looks like he's gonna be up to no good. I also have an idea.. (I'll PM you) Last... Salomie a WITCH!!! OMG! I hope the magic doenst go to her head and she looses John.

Well, as you may know, I still have 1.11-1.15 written and they will stay the same. I will re-post them after 1.10 is re-released, but my point is: 1.13 "Damage" is when Sam/Michael sleep together Pyro is going to be interesting next season. He's basically a loner: I.S. wants him dead (I tried to throw a little hint of that in the Patrick/James/Nina convo at the end) and Riley and the gang obviously don't care for him. About the idea...(PM) Salomie is a witch, and she tries to make it a one time thing, but next season she'll go back into it and Season 3 it will come big. And, no, it will not be a metaphor for drugs *sigh*

Questions:
-When will Katie return?
-Will Katie and Sam meet? Will Michael and Riley get into it?
-Will Salomie stay a witch, or is this just a trial for her?
-Will Chris and Jill workout, or is it just a fling?

- Katie returns 2.01 with a bang: she's elected mayor of Laintan.
- By the time Katie and Sam meet, Sam and Riley will already be split up, so it won't necessarily matter. About Michael and Riley meeting and maybe fighting: end of next episode shows some of that.
- Salomie - not a trial.
- Well, Jill kind of kills Chris in the season finale (already released ), so no, it don't work out

Bengy, this was a good episode, very epic. Cant wait till the next episode!

Thanks SO much, Kevin! Love your feedback, as always!!!!!

My responses are bolded in the quotes.

[kjhurd15]

Let me just say again I love ur fanfic series
I especially love this new episode.
God evil Salomie is pretty funny.

I give ur entire season a 10 good job

[BlasterBoy]

Oh, thanks so much, Karl! Glad you like the new episode, and Evil!Salomie was so much fun to write. Glad ya like her

Watch out for Season 2 in a month