Feedback for QueenC

[Llywela]

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[QueenC]

Thank you, Jo.

All of the episodes so far in my spin-off of Buffy, Rogue Redemption, are up and listed in the index under the Virtual Series subsection.

Any other fictions I write will be listed and linked in here.

Original Fiction:
Shadowed Memories

[Dark Ages]

YAY! I'm your first feed back person!!!!

Well I read episode two season one and now I'm in the middle of episode three and I have to say I'm loving it right now. I know I ended reading episode one back in Buffy World but then it went all shut down on us. So I've been waiting for you to post them here and you have and now I'm reading them.

Spoiler:

Well I have to say that episode two was very good in my eyes and actually inspired me to make my series as good. First off, I love the whole Marie character. She is great on so many levels. I love how one minute she's all meak and shy then the next a stern woman. I 'm really intrested in learning more about her gift. It's nerve wrecking that I dont know what it is. The episode was well written and the storyline really showed who Marie was as a person. I like the fact that her and Alan were both friends with Lindsey. I think within Lindsey's death it brought out a friendship between Marie and Alan. So I will be reading more and cant wait to see the season unfold!
-Kevin

[QueenC]

YAY! I'm your first feed back person!!!!

Well I read episode two season one and now I'm in the middle of episode three and I have to say I'm loving it right now. I know I ended reading episode one back in Buffy World but then it went all shut down on us. So I've been waiting for you to post them here and you have and now I'm reading them.

Spoiler:

Well I have to say that episode two was very good in my eyes and actually inspired me to make my series as good. First off, I love the whole Marie character. She is great on so many levels. I love how one minute she's all meak and shy then the next a stern woman. I 'm really intrested in learning more about her gift. It's nerve wrecking that I dont know what it is. The episode was well written and the storyline really showed who Marie was as a person. I like the fact that her and Alan were both friends with Lindsey. I think within Lindsey's death it brought out a friendship between Marie and Alan. So I will be reading more and cant wait to see the season unfold!
-Kevin

Ooh, feedback. Shiny.

Haha yay for spoiler tags even though this was season one! But it's okay- I don't want any new readers spoiled, either! And I'm glad you're gonna continue reading the series even though it took me forever to get it back up.

Spoiler:

First off...it's not everyday that I inspire someone. Usually, I'm the inspiree. I'm glad that you like the writing. I honestly am not too fond of it and I think late season one's/season two's writing is wayyy better, but everyone has their own opinion. Plus, you haven't read those episodes yet.

Hee, I like Marie's character too. Not that I'm biased or anything. She's so fun to write, and as her character storyline develops she gets even more interesting, if I do say so myself.

That was the idea, with the whole both knowing her thing. But remember that they didn't know each other, so the death isn't going to spark instant friendship.

Thank you so much for the feedback, Kevin! I can't wait to hear more from you as you keep reading.