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Challenge Eight: The Results!!!
Thanks to everyone who entered. I really loved getting the pieces, and especially since Aissy entered, I'm happy I had such a strong word limit 
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Rep should have reach you all
and I've also constructed awards of sorts? but for the text, all the awards are identical, though? it was super hard to really rate them, but I did my best...
Honourable mentions
Third Place
Second Place
A little tiny bit of feedback for each piece? if you want any more details of my thoughts I would be more than happy to do so!
Illyrian
Special thanks- your first BF fanfic challenge- welcome!
Entry A
I like the scene you chose to do, it's a nice moment in which to get into everyone's heads, all the secrets, but I don't feel like the voices of the characters was captured as well as they might have been, sometimes because grammar was a little sloppy.
Entry B
I like that you have made something new and I like the storyline that you're playing out here, but it really loses something, I think the grammar/expression could be a little sharper and that would make the storyline even clearer.
Wolfie Gilmore
Love this one. A nice kind of symmetry, mixing characters around and around.
Aissy
NKOTB
"Get your own damn toys! Watch him try and get an offspring." I think I love you. Lmao. Very awesome, very much fun. Thank you.
Back and Forth
Refreshing to see a non Jossverse one (even though I know, that was what I wanted!) And Emily can text. Hilarious!
In and out I liked the feelings, but didn't follow it as I might have, somehow.
Litzie:
Entry One
Fabulous! And bonus points for choosing a Tillow piece, hurrah for teh femslash! Love it. All of it. All perspectives. Xander's reaction, Buffy's, both so self absorbed, but in a good way.
Entry Two
I really liked this one too, I know you said you had to enter it, and I had that impression as I read it, that maybe it was one of those pieces that writes/tells itself.
Tangent:
"I've got a knife to return." Ah, to me, this summed it all up. Love it. Super beautiful.
!!!Rep should have reach you all
and I've also constructed awards of sorts? but for the text, all the awards are identical, though? it was super hard to really rate them, but I did my best...Honourable mentions
Spoiler:
Third Place
Spoiler:
Second Place
Spoiler:
Spoiler:
A little tiny bit of feedback for each piece? if you want any more details of my thoughts I would be more than happy to do so!
Illyrian
Special thanks- your first BF fanfic challenge- welcome!
Entry A
I like the scene you chose to do, it's a nice moment in which to get into everyone's heads, all the secrets, but I don't feel like the voices of the characters was captured as well as they might have been, sometimes because grammar was a little sloppy.
Entry B
I like that you have made something new and I like the storyline that you're playing out here, but it really loses something, I think the grammar/expression could be a little sharper and that would make the storyline even clearer.
Wolfie Gilmore
Love this one. A nice kind of symmetry, mixing characters around and around.
Aissy
NKOTB
"Get your own damn toys! Watch him try and get an offspring." I think I love you. Lmao. Very awesome, very much fun. Thank you.
Back and Forth
Refreshing to see a non Jossverse one (even though I know, that was what I wanted!) And Emily can text. Hilarious!
In and out I liked the feelings, but didn't follow it as I might have, somehow.
Litzie:
Entry One
Fabulous! And bonus points for choosing a Tillow piece, hurrah for teh femslash! Love it. All of it. All perspectives. Xander's reaction, Buffy's, both so self absorbed, but in a good way.
Entry Two
I really liked this one too, I know you said you had to enter it, and I had that impression as I read it, that maybe it was one of those pieces that writes/tells itself.
Tangent:
"I've got a knife to return." Ah, to me, this summed it all up. Love it. Super beautiful.
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