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    Default Haven Episode 2.4 22. The Ashes You Made

    This is the fourth episode of "Haven" Season 2, an original series written by me. I hope you enjoy reading it! If you have any feedback, positive or critical, please post it here, thank you

    Haven Episode 2.4 22. The Ashes You Made

    Written and Produced by Alex Hart
    Edited by Lex

    Special thanks to Heather

    Disclaimer: The series “Haven”, its characters, locations and ideas are all creations belonging to Alex Hart. The work is fictional and meant for entertainment purposes only. No unauthorised usage of anything in “Haven” is permitted without prior permission, thank you.

    TEASER

    OPEN ON:

    INT. BEDROOM - NIGHT

    “Orchestra” by The Servant plays.

    Dominic, aged 16, lies on his bed, his eyes closed. They open slowly, an entranced look on his face. He sits up.

    ‘Here I am
    A young man
    Come and get me if you can
    Up in my room covered in flames’

    CUT TO:

    INT. HALLWAY

    Dominic pulls on a coat and then looks around at the house thoughtfully. He turns and opens the front door.

    ‘Meet me at the cinema
    You can take me in your car
    I'll lie in the back and stare at the planes’

    CUT TO:

    EXT. SUBURBAN HOUSE

    Dominic stands at the threshold of the house and lights a cigarette. He takes a drag as he walks away. He drops the lighter.

    ‘There's an orchestra in me
    Playing endlessly
    I even hear it now’

    As the lighter hits the ground, flames engulf the doorway behind Dominic and spread into the house. Dominic closes his eyes as the glow of the fire flickers on his skin.

    ‘They play in the devil's key
    An endless symphony
    I even hear it now’

    Dominic walks away, his wet footprints starting to catch alight as well.

    ‘And I listen to the music
    Beautiful music’

    Dominic turns a corner exhaling, smiling slightly.

    ‘Yes I listen to the music
    Beautiful music’

    FADE TO: GREY

    FADE TO:

    INT. HAVEN KITCHEN

    Dominic stands next to the kitchen table, wincing slightly as he supports himself with his crutches. He looks in pain as he bends his leg, and prepares to sit. He cries out slightly as he does, sweat appearing on his brow. His hand slips slightly and he stumbles into the table, knocking over a glass of water. He breathes heavily, staring at the ground, looking annoyed as he sits down fully. The water drips off the edge of the table on to the floor. The door opens; Alandra walks in. Dominic looks over at her, not entirely pleased to see her. Alandra narrows her brow as she sees Dominic’s condition, concerned.


    Alandra: Hey...

    Dominic tries to appear fine. He smiles weakly, inhaling.

    Dominic: Hey.

    Alandra looks unconvinced.

    Alandra: Where’s Grace?

    Dominic: I think she’s having a shower, I don’t know...

    He exhales, picking up the cup. Alandra watches and walks over to the sink. She takes some kitchen towel and then walks back to the table. Dominic watches her, frowning.

    Dominic: You don’t need to do that.

    Alandra: I think I do. Water is a hazard in a work environment, after all.

    She raises her eyebrows, smiling weakly. Dominic does not smile. He looks down at the meal he has prepared for himself but does not eat. Alandra watches him.

    Alandra: Haven’t seen you this bad in a while; physio’s tough, huh?

    Dominic: Yeah...

    Alandra nods vaguely. She lifts the kitchen towel, now soaked with the water. She stands.

    Alandra: Without making you sound like an invalid...is it really such a good idea for you to be active when you’re like this?

    Dominic sighs.

    Dominic: If I stop using the leg it’ll be worse.

    Alandra: Well, clearly trying to use it without anyone else around is a bad idea.

    Dominic looks down seriously.

    Dominic: Could you...find out if Grace can get down here soon?

    Alandra nods.

    Alandra: Sure; don’t go anywhere.

    She smiles weakly. Dominic smiles back slightly as she walks away. He stares at the table.

    CUT TO:

    INT. HAVEN STAFF CORRIDOR

    Alandra approaches Grace’s door and knocks; there is no answer. Alandra hesitates and then knocks again.


    Alandra: Grace?

    Again, no answer. Alandra slowly opens the door and peers in. Her gaze rests on one spot and her eyes widen. Grace can be seen lying, motionless in the doorway between the en suite and the rest of her room. Alandra hurries over. Juliet follows, at first unaware of Grace’s condition. Her expression changes to shock as she sees Alandra kneeling down trying to rouse Grace. She hurries over too. There is a close up of Grace’s eyes. They flicker open slightly and then close again.

    CUT TO: BLACK

    OPENING CREDITS

    EXT. CROWDED STREET, BELVIEW

    “Black Black Heart” by David Usher plays. “Haven” in black, torn letters fades in and out. People walk past in slow motion.

    FADE TO:

    EXT. HOTEL ABOVE NEW HAVEN

    The sun shines down upon the hotel as smartly dressed people walk in and out.

    FADE TO:

    INT. NEW HAVEN LOBBY

    The beat of the song kicks in. The screen has a blue tint. Blurred figures are seen in the background, walking to and fro.


    MELISSA GEORGE

    JUSTIN THEROUX

    QUICK FADE TO: BLACK

    QUICK FADE TO:

    INT. STAIRWELL

    Blurred figures walk up and down the stairwell.


    LEISHA HAILEY

    FAMKE JANSSEN

    QUICK FADE TO: BLACK

    QUICK FADE TO:

    INT. NEW HAVEN, KITCHEN

    Blurred figures work in the kitchen.


    CHARLIE HUNNAM

    SANDRA OH

    QUICK FADE TO: BLACK

    QUICK FADE TO:

    INT. NEW HAVEN, DINING AREA

    Blurred figures sit and walk around.


    JOSH DUHAMEL

    KELLY CARLSON

    QUICK FADE TO: BLACK

    QUICK FADE TO:

    INT. NEW HAVEN, CORRIDOR

    Blurred figures move in and out of rooms and walk down the corridor.


    AMANDA SEYFRIED

    PERCY DAGGS

    QUICK FADE TO: BLACK

    QUICK FADE TO:

    EXT. BELVIEW CITYSCAPE – DUSK

    The sun sets on the horizon.


    RYAN CARNES

    STEPHANIE ROMANOV

    CUT TO: BLACK
    Last edited by Alex; 24-05-10 at 09:06 PM.

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