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    Thank you, Jo!

    Missing Scenes Series:

    Graduation Season 3. Ever wonder why the writers didn't give Xander and Cordelia a chance to say goodbye while they were sitting next to each other on graduation?

    The Flowers Why wasn't Giles at the wedding that never happened?

    Missing Episode Between S6 and S7 What happened on that summer where Willow was in England, Spike was in Africa, and Buffy, Xander and Dawn were the only Scooby Gang?

    Lost Friendship Whatever happened to the friendship between Spike and Dawn in S7?

    Stange This is for all the fans who are still frustrated that Xander and Faith didn't get a chance to talk in season seven. Set in Dirty Girls.


    Drabbles:

    My Son's Sixth Birthday Party

    Homecoming Queen of Year 1997

    Heartbreaking Gaze

    Life As A Watcher

    Anya's Annoyed

    Confusion

    Fics:

    The Ruin of Good Men Season 6. Xander is abusing Spike, alcohol, everything and, on top of that, himself.

    Hard to See Her Moving On Season 7. Xander saw something he didn't want to see.

    Only Guy She Trusts Xander visiting Buffy after six months spent in Africa.

    Adapting to Change Buffy is dealing with the changes around her. This is told completely from Buffy's POV.

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    La Femme Spander Anya wants revenge and she'll be getting it by cursing Spike.

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    The Young And Hopeless

    Miss America

    Standing

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    I read "Graduation", I liked that a lot. It's nice to see an author taking the time to say "oh, wait, Xander and other characters had human relationships and emotions as well!"

    I'm reading the lost episode right now and it is amazing. Still just to the credits, and it's better than several actual televised episodes Also,
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    "City on the Edge of Forever" humor! And Buffy gets it! And caps the line!!! BWUHAHA!


    You've really got everyone's voices down, and you might be the Buffy/Xander ambassador of fic, it's just that great.

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    Thank you. I'm glad you're enjoying the missing scenes I've written many, but not as much as my friend Mirage. Her stuff are still in Buffyworld, but you can find all our missing scenes in LJ here.

    I've written Xander/Buffy Post-Chosen, I'll try to post it here today.
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    Hi. I just read Only Guy She Trusts, really nice job building tension here. I still have mixed feelings about the end since I now really want to know what Giles did.
    "All I ask is that... that you try to see me."

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    i'm glad you enjoyed it As for what Giles did, it's up to the readers, I left a few hints here and there, Angel and Spike are the biggest hint
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    Yeah I see the hints, but I kind of wanted it to be more than I expect, like something really shocking.
    "All I ask is that... that you try to see me."

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    A great fic, Sosa, although one complaint -- you don't have to put a disclaimer out there that you think Season 8 is canon. If anything, fic that isn't Season 8 compatible should be tagged AU

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    Just read the missing ep between 6 and 7, and enjoyed it. I think the monster aspect was the weakest part, but it did allow for some great character interactions. The scenes of Buffy/Dawn/Xander were a lot of fun, and the part where Xander sits by Buffy while she is all broken up was great.

    I did kinda feel that Buffy should have figured out that they were the ones who killed the other demons though. Dunno why, it just seemed appropriate. Still, fun read, and one of the better fics I have read lately.

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    Seriously Farah, you're too good. Only Guy She Trusts brought tears to my eyes...
    I, too, wanted to know what Giles did, but anything I guess upsets me too much... can you PM me and tell me?!

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    Thank you, guys, so much! I'm a little busy and can't reply to each one of you but I really appreciate the feedback and hopefully I'll post more of my fics
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    La Femme Spander

    Very, very cute popcorn piece of fiction. I chuckled more than I'll ever admit. Suppose it's time to wander through the remainder of your collected works.

    Val <--is such a lazy wench

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    Just read "Graduation" Farah and must say I loved it

    Both Xander and Cordy were in character and I loved how you didn't make everything so dramatic. It was simple and as a result envoked so much more emotion than it would have if you'd been over the top with it. I just loved it, I could picture it in my head so perfectly.

    Well done!
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    I haven't read all your fanfiction yet. However, I really enjoyed your drabbles. My favorites were Anya's Annoyed and Life As a Watcher. The former made me really miss Anya . I adored Lost Friendship. Poor Dawn. Poor Spike. At least my vamp now has Beck from the Lynch comics as a young friend. Dawn is still having abandonment issues during season 8. Hopefully, if the IDW and Dark Horse comics have a crossover those two can have closure .

    Will read more fic and give more feedback later.

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    Thanks, Valyssia, part two of La Femme Spander will be posted soon

    vampmogs, thank you! This feedback coming from you made my day, I'm so glad you liked the missing scene I sure hope you don't stumble over my older fics, because they were too over the top

    Thank you for the feedbacks, Curiouswolf, that Spike-Dawn missing scene is one of my top five fave fics I wrote Can't wait for more feedbacks from you
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    Quote Originally Posted by Sosa lola View Post
    Thanks, Valyssia, part two of La Femme Spander will be posted soon
    Consumed...right after you posted. Made me laugh again. Willow twitching over Xander's legs was just too good. I think you should leave him like that...errr her like that. Talk about an adjustment and minor justice for all the times he fixated on a girl's cleavage.

    Brings to mind a movie...damned if I can recall the title. Basically it was about a chauvinist who's cursed to be female, lives the life and as her final soul saving act has a baby. The idea that he find one female, human that could actually love him. hum... no idea...what that was called, but it was a good chick flick. *snicker*

    Though...I'll have to admit that the whole turning a guy into a girl thing...and making him a total hottie isn't how I'd be inclined to go. You wouldn't be able to find a paper bag big enough to hide all that ugly. I'm evil though. Think about the frat party scene where Xander's hazed and you'll get the picture.

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    Quote Originally Posted by Sosa lola View Post
    vampmogs, thank you! This feedback coming from you made my day, I'm so glad you liked the missing scene I sure hope you don't stumble over my older fics, because they were too over the top
    Well I'm glad it made you happy! Your very welcome, it was a great read and I was really impressed by it. Keep up the good work Farah
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    Sorry for the late reply, but thank you so much guys for your sweet words
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    Hey, guys, if you wanna read the fics I've written, which are a lot, I've put them all in a list in my LJ:

    http://lusciousxander.livejournal.com/83401.html#cutid1

    Enjoy
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    "Lost Hero" is a wonderful story that works both as a fic and as a meta on Buffy's journey in season 8. I vaguely remember reading it about 6 months ago (was it on LJ?) - but today, when season 9 is looming on the horizon, "Lost Hero" reads differently - like an attempt to guess the events of s9. Damn, I'd love to see Spike, Xander and Dawn on the ship working together during a mission!

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