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Llywela
24-07-07, 09:22 PM
Post feedback for Rosamunde's fics in here :)
Rosamunde
25-07-07, 07:03 PM
I have a feedback thread? Hee! Cool. Thank you, Jo :)

My Fics So Far

In Buffy:

Faces, Ethan/Spike
http://www.buffyforums.net/forums/showthread.php?t=347

But you don't really care for music, do you? Gen, Dawn-centric
http://www.buffyforums.net/forums/showthread.php?t=377

In Doctor Who (all Doctor/Master centric :D ) :

The Blue Depth of the Sky
http://www.buffyforums.net/forums/showthread.php?t=563

Like gold to aery thinness beat
http://www.buffyforums.net/forums/showthread.php?t=648

A Chink Too Wide
http://www.buffyforums.net/forums/showthread.php?t=793

:)Any Feedback Contribution Gratefully Accepted :)
Veverka
09-09-07, 05:36 AM
The Air In Your Lungs... wow, that was just lovely. Maybe I'm just lazy and don't want to read too much, but I liked how I felt the strength of the piece was its simplicity, and the lovely day to day Dawn/Buffy interactions, all highlighted as being the more real for the loss...
Rosamunde
09-09-07, 01:40 PM
The Air In Your Lungs... wow, that was just lovely. Maybe I'm just lazy and don't want to read too much, but I liked how I felt the strength of the piece was its simplicity, and the lovely day to day Dawn/Buffy interactions, all highlighted as being the more real for the loss...

I'm really glad you liked! :) I'm pleased the simplicity worked: I think character pieces don't need as much length to work, and I'm glad you thought so too.

Thank you
Dorian's Kitten
20-09-07, 05:16 PM
It does, work that is :). The Air in Your Lungs was elegant really. As mentioned the simplicity was a strength as was the rather graphic imagery mixed with somewhat light dialogue.

This line:
“I dream about rotting flesh, and choking on stale air, and the harshness of sunlight after the light of heaven. I don’t dream about you, Spike. I never have.”
working as both a comfort and a sword through the heart-perfect. White, hot, tragic perfection.
Rosamunde
20-09-07, 10:22 PM
It does, work that is :). The Air in Your Lungs was elegant really. As mentioned the simplicity was a strength as was the rather graphic imagery mixed with somewhat light dialogue.

This line:
“I dream about rotting flesh, and choking on stale air, and the harshness of sunlight after the light of heaven. I don’t dream about you, Spike. I never have.”
working as both a comfort and a sword through the heart-perfect. White, hot, tragic perfection.

Thank you so much! You say all the right words! :D I'm so glad you thought it all worked.