Veverka
26-07-08, 10:44 AM
Thanks to everyone who entered. I really loved getting the pieces, and especially since Aissy entered, I’m happy I had such a strong word limit :1poke: :lol: !!!
Rep should have reach you all :xd and I’ve also constructed awards of sorts… but for the text, all the awards are identical, though… it was super hard to really rate them, but I did my best...
Honourable mentions
http://i224.photobucket.com/albums/dd45/veverka-in-winter/honmenTangent.jpg
http://i224.photobucket.com/albums/dd45/veverka-in-winter/honmenIllyrian.jpg
Third Place
Teh Femslash
http://i224.photobucket.com/albums/dd45/veverka-in-winter/ThirdLitzie.jpg
Second Place
The double date
http://i224.photobucket.com/albums/dd45/veverka-in-winter/SecondWolfie.jpg
NKOTB
http://i224.photobucket.com/albums/dd45/veverka-in-winter/FirstAissy.jpg
A little tiny bit of feedback for each piece… if you want any more details of my thoughts I would be more than happy to do so!
Illyrian
Special thanks- your first BF fanfic challenge- welcome!
Entry A
I like the scene you chose to do, it’s a nice moment in which to get into everyone’s heads, all the secrets, but I don’t feel like the voices of the characters was captured as well as they might have been, sometimes because grammar was a little sloppy.
Entry B
I like that you have made something new and I like the storyline that you’re playing out here, but it really loses something, I think the grammar/expression could be a little sharper and that would make the storyline even clearer.
Wolfie Gilmore
Love this one. A nice kind of symmetry, mixing characters around and around.
Aissy
NKOTB
“Get your own damn toys! Watch him try and get an offspring.” I think I love you. Lmao. Very awesome, very much fun. Thank you.
Back and Forth
Refreshing to see a non Jossverse one (even though I know, that was what I wanted!) And Emily can text. Hilarious!
In and out I liked the feelings, but didn’t follow it as I might have, somehow.
Litzie:
Entry One
Fabulous! And bonus points for choosing a Tillow piece, hurrah for teh femslash! Love it. All of it. All perspectives. Xander’s reaction, Buffy’s, both so self absorbed, but in a good way.
Entry Two
I really liked this one too, I know you said you had to enter it, and I had that impression as I read it, that maybe it was one of those pieces that writes/tells itself.
Tangent:
“I’ve got a knife to return.” Ah, to me, this summed it all up. Love it. Super beautiful.
Rep should have reach you all :xd and I’ve also constructed awards of sorts… but for the text, all the awards are identical, though… it was super hard to really rate them, but I did my best...
Honourable mentions
http://i224.photobucket.com/albums/dd45/veverka-in-winter/honmenTangent.jpg
http://i224.photobucket.com/albums/dd45/veverka-in-winter/honmenIllyrian.jpg
Third Place
Teh Femslash
http://i224.photobucket.com/albums/dd45/veverka-in-winter/ThirdLitzie.jpg
Second Place
The double date
http://i224.photobucket.com/albums/dd45/veverka-in-winter/SecondWolfie.jpg
NKOTB
http://i224.photobucket.com/albums/dd45/veverka-in-winter/FirstAissy.jpg
A little tiny bit of feedback for each piece… if you want any more details of my thoughts I would be more than happy to do so!
Illyrian
Special thanks- your first BF fanfic challenge- welcome!
Entry A
I like the scene you chose to do, it’s a nice moment in which to get into everyone’s heads, all the secrets, but I don’t feel like the voices of the characters was captured as well as they might have been, sometimes because grammar was a little sloppy.
Entry B
I like that you have made something new and I like the storyline that you’re playing out here, but it really loses something, I think the grammar/expression could be a little sharper and that would make the storyline even clearer.
Wolfie Gilmore
Love this one. A nice kind of symmetry, mixing characters around and around.
Aissy
NKOTB
“Get your own damn toys! Watch him try and get an offspring.” I think I love you. Lmao. Very awesome, very much fun. Thank you.
Back and Forth
Refreshing to see a non Jossverse one (even though I know, that was what I wanted!) And Emily can text. Hilarious!
In and out I liked the feelings, but didn’t follow it as I might have, somehow.
Litzie:
Entry One
Fabulous! And bonus points for choosing a Tillow piece, hurrah for teh femslash! Love it. All of it. All perspectives. Xander’s reaction, Buffy’s, both so self absorbed, but in a good way.
Entry Two
I really liked this one too, I know you said you had to enter it, and I had that impression as I read it, that maybe it was one of those pieces that writes/tells itself.
Tangent:
“I’ve got a knife to return.” Ah, to me, this summed it all up. Love it. Super beautiful.